Friday, September 1, 2017

Kendra E. Ardnek Cover Overhaul!



Hey'a, everyone! So, remember how I mentioned on Tuesday that Kendra E. Ardnek is overhauling her six major novels to add new covers and improved content? And remember how I said I was participating in the cover reveal? Well- today's the day! Along with the new covers, I'm sharing Kendra's notes on what we can expect from the new version, my own thoughts on the new cover, and a mini-review of each book. That's a lot of ground to cover, so let's get started, shall we?

We'll start with the Bookania Quests, all of which have covers designed by the author. First up, we have Kendra's debut novel, Sew, It's a Quest:
Two twins in a fairy tale world must find their Fairy Godmother before their eighteenth birthday, lest they forever be stuck with the other’s gift.

Kendra's Revision Notes:
I sent this book to my kindle, tore it to shreds, then retyped the whole thing, making every word fight to stay in the book. I completely rewrote one chapter, and added/expanded several scenes, focusing on character development and pacing, in particular Robin’s character. 

Cover Thoughts:Woah. People in the Hangout chat were saying that they weren't expecting Sew to be pink, so I was kind of prepared, but- woah. Yeah. That's pink. I like it, though, more than I expected to. Maybe it's pink, but it's also very dramatic. Also, I like how the sword is intertwined with the words and the little needle and thread. My only complaint is that Kendra's name doesn't really stand out.

Mini-Review: So, this used to be my second-to-least favorite of Kendra's full-length books, mostly because, as Kendra herself has said, she released it into the wild before it was really ready. However, the re-released version is much better. There are still some rough spots and awkward sections of dialogue, and Doranna's speech still drives me a little nuts (even though I understand the reason behind it). However, it's still a fabulous fairy/folk tale retelling that combines Robin Hood, Sleeping Beauty, and an obscure little fairy tale called the Mountain Princess into a lighthearted, clever, and unique story. There are some pretty cool plot twists- some which I saw coming even the first time around, some which I didn't- and also some rather amusing twists on common expressions. In short, while Sew still isn't a perfect book, I do recommend it. (Also, it's permafree on Smashwords, so you have absolutely no reason not to at least get it.)

Find it on: Goodreads || Smashwords || Createspace

We continue through the Bookania Quests with Do You Take this Quest?
A prince’s quest for allies against his misery uncle and a madcap race to get home for a wedding

Kendra's Revision Notes:
This book has one added chapter, a few (potentially) added scenes, and a severe edit. Again, focus is going to Robin’s character development. I hadn’t the maturity to completely handle her emotional situation when I wrote this book, and now I intend to fix that. 

Cover Thoughts:It's so pretty! And purple! Also, there's the cake from the original cover in the picture, and it makes me immensely happy. I honestly think that this is my favorite of the new covers. I just love so much about it- the style, and the color, and the texture, and everything. 

Mini-Review:
So, Take is currently my least favorite of Kendra's novels- though that may change once Kendra re-releases it. As it stands, there is a fair bit I enjoy about this book: a unique retelling of the King Arthur legend, plenty of other fairy tale references, a whole host of colorful characters, and more of the same style of humor found in Sew. However, it shares a few issues with the original version of book 1- namely, rough writing and a Robin with whom I don't really get along. In addition, the flood of new characters can be confusing, and there seemed to be very little tension at all in the main storyline. The rewrite should fix most of those issues, though, so if you're interested but concerned, maybe just wait a little while (and go bug Kendra and read her other books in the meantime).

Find it on: Goodreads  

Finally, to finish up the Bookania Quests, we have My Kingdom for a Quest!
Prince Arthur’s quest to take back his kingdom, and Casperl’s quest to find out how, exactly, he’s a prince.
  
Kendra's Revision Notes:
This book was mostly clean … but it’s getting a part two. AKA, book 3.5, The Quest for a Quince, AKA, Casperl’s story. There will be a edit to part one, though. 

Cover Thoughts:
Like I said, Take is my favorite of the new covers- but Kingdom is definitely my second favorite. It's a little darker than the other Bookania covers, with that castle looming in the background, but that's a good thing. We've got the sword front-and-center, stuck in a pillar like in the original- which I like, though the pillar looks off. And once again, I really like the texture, this time in the grass. Random little things are what make or break a cover, y'know?

Mini-Review: 
This was my favorite of the Bookania Quests, though I think it's been replaced by the new version of Sew. It focuses on one of my favorite Bookania characters, Arthur, and is primarily a King Arthur retelling, though other stories are woven in as well. As usual, I love the twists Kendra puts on the classic stories, especially the Lady of the Lake bit. I also like that the characters who get the most screentime are mostly the ones who I like better, though the sheer number of characters is still a little hard to keep track of.

Find it on: Goodreads

Next up, Kendra's single standalone, The Ankulen. The new cover for this was designed by the lovely and talented Alea Harper, another fantasy and speculative fiction author, though she's currently unpublished.
Jen knows she had an imagination once – how far will she go to get it back?

Kendra's Revision Notes:
Mostly just a thorough edit. I don’t foresee any great changes.

Cover Thoughts:
Honest opinion: I'm not a fan. The new cover really doesn't seem to convey what the book is about, and it has an odd grungy vibe that doesn't go with what I remember of the book. Also, while I like that Alea included the titular Ankulen at the bottom, something seems off about its presence, almost like it doesn't blend or mesh properly with the rest of the cover. For a different book, it could be good. But for this book- well, like I said up front: not a fan.

Mini-Review:
I have never read a story like this one, but I absolutely love it. The idea of a writer losing her imagination is, quite frankly, terrifying to me, and so the idea of a quest to get one's imagination back is naturally captivating. I expected Jen to be a bit more enthusiastic about the matter from the start, but I liked her character development through the story. I also enjoyed the storyworld; Kendra captures the nature of a child's imaginary world well, such that it feels natural, but I can still take it seriously. A few things about this book bothered me- namely the very blatant allegory at the end- but it's still an excellent book.

Find it on: Goodreads

And we end with Kendra's second series, the Rizkaland Legends. This contains both the cover I'm least sad to see go (Water Princess, Fire Prince) and the cover I'm most sad to lose (Lady Dragon, Tela Du). These covers, like that of The Ankulen, were designed by Alea Harper, though they have a distinctly different style.

When two teens are pulled into another world, fire and water must work together to defeat a dragon.

Kendra's Revision Notes:
Again, mostly a thorough edit, but there will be a few continuity fixes, and I’ll be adding a bonus scene to the extra stuff at the end.

Cover Thoughts:
As far as quality goes, the new cover is much better than the old one. The color scheme is gorgeous, the design behind the title is pretty, and the fonts work really well together. But once again, I almost feel like this doesn't quite fit the book? Yes, there's a mountain. Yes, about half the book is spent trying to get to and through a mountain. Yes, the color scheme works with the water and fire thing. But honestly, the vibe I'm getting off it is "Inspirational quote picture on a hipster Tumblr," not "Awesome and unique portal fantasy." I don't know. Maybe that's just me.

Mini-Review:
So, I wasn't thrilled with this book for most of the first part- the world was unique, the storyline was fun, but Clara kind of drove me crazy. Then we met Andrew (who is, by the way, wonderful), and then after that, Clara met Andrew, and suddenly the book was much better because we had someone to moderate Clara's intensity. While the book isn't perfect, there is a lot to love: Laura, Andrew, Clarand, the worldbuilding, Amber, the plot, the themes . . .there's a reason that the Rizkaland Legends are my favorite of Kendra's books, and that reason starts here.

Find it on: Goodreads

And we end with Kendra's second-to-most-recent release and my absolute favorite of any of her books, Lady Dragon, Tela Du. As I said already, I'm most sad to see this cover go. I loved the original: the colors, the silhouettes, everything. That said, the new version is pretty nice.
Only the Tela Du stands in Amber’s way for ruling Rizkaland forever. Petra would much rather find her long-lost sisters than fight a Lady Dragon.
 
Kendra's Revision Notes:
Edits mostly. 
 
Cover Thoughts:
Like I said- pretty nice! I don't know if I like it more than the original, but I think I like it just as much. It keeps the silhouettes and actually has essentially the same color scheme, but with more red and purple and less gold. And this cover suits the book better than Water Princess, Fire Prince's did, even though it's a similar style. I think the silhouettes help a lot with that, since they keep the focus on the characters and story. 
 
Mini-Review:I love basically everything about this book. The characters. The ships. The emphasis on family. The fact that there are no unrealistic weapons prodigies. The plot. The plot twists. The world. The magic. Everything. Ok, maybe not quite everything- I didn't quite connect with a few of the characters, and that made the first part a bit difficult to get through. Also, there's Karyn. I can understand her motivation, but I don't like her. But both of those things are mostly personal opinion, and my overall personal opinion is that Lady Dragon, Tela Du is awesome.
Find it on: Goodreads

About Kendra E. Ardnek:
Kendra E. Ardnek loves fairytales and twisting them in new and exciting ways. She's been or acting them on her dozen plus cousins and siblings for years. "Finish your story, Kendra," is frequently heard at family gatherings. Her sole life goal has always been to grow up and be an author of fantasy and children's tales that glorify God and His Word.
 
Find her online at: Website || Blog || Goodreads || Facebook || Twitter || Amazon 

For those who are interested, Kendra is running a giveaway of a full signed collection of all her books. Sounds pretty awesome, no? Full details are on her blog, but I will say that comments on the cover reveal blog posts give you a better chance of winning. I'll post a full list of participating blogs below.

Thanks, everyone, for stopping by, and Kendra for letting me participate in the cover reveal! For you, readers- have you read anything by Kendra? Also, which of these covers is your favorite? Please tell me in the comments!
Thanks again for reading, and don't forget to check out the rest of the cover reveal posts!
-Sarah (Leilani Sunblade) 

Other Cover Reveal Stops:

10 comments:

  1. I find myself agreeing with a lot of your cover analysis. With The Ankulen, I think it's the brick that gives it that feel - the rest fits in just fine with the story to me. And you nailed the feel of WPFP. Having already read the books, I like the cover and its colors a lot though.

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    1. Thanks! And yeah, the brick is the major source of that grungy feel; if there were trees or something instead, it would fit a lot better, I think.
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  2. I was not expecting Sew to be pink, but I love the fact that it's pink!!

    I'm really glad she included the cake.

    I too like the over all look of this cover, but to me ( I just realized, it says 'Sleeping Beauty'. I'm not sure why.

    Yeah, not a fan either. Grungy, that's the perfect word!! Plus the size of the Ankulen down at the bottom in comparison to the legs on the top feels very out of proportion to me.

    Ah! I think this cover gives off a sense of mystery and it totally makes me think fantasy. Not exactly portal fantasy, but definitely fantasy.

    :)

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    1. Yep. It's very bold and it makes the book stand out.

      Agreed!

      Interesting. I don't think it has a strong Sleeping Beauty feeling, but that's just me.

      I definitely see what you mean. It's like "Why is the bracelet thing down here bigger than the legs? That's weird."

      Interesting. I guess I can see that? But I hold to what I said.

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  3. I LOVE Sew's cover -- everything about it! :D It's my favorite of the new ones! ^_^

    I neeed the King Arthur things. *flails*

    I enjoyed The Ankulen too! It's the only full-length of Kendra's I've read yet... *cough*

    WPFP looks fantasy to me -- and the title helps with that. :D Must read sometime... (Also, portal fantasy is not popular with big publishers these days, for SOME reason, so I don't know what the kind of cover for portal fantasy SHOULD be anymore... >.>)

    I was NOT a fan of the original LDTD cover, sooo I guess to each their own. XD I love hearing about peoples' opinions of the covers old and new though -- it's fun. :)

    Enjoyed your thoughts and mini reviews! ^_^

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    1. It is very awesome.

      The King Arthur things are awesome, but I recommend that you wait until the new versions are officially completed and released to read them. *nods* But you can read Sew now.

      Did you review the Ankulen? I know I remember seeing something about how you've read it . . .

      I didn't know that portal fantasy isn't popular- that's weird. I still love it! Maybe it's just that it's been done so much that they feel like they've seen it all.

      Thanks for reading and commenting!

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    2. Yep! Will definitely wait a bit for those. :D

      I linked my review in my post today... but here, have another link of it. XD https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/920558293 (I only reviewed it on Goodreads, since I didn't have my review blog back then.)

      I read some articles once about how big publishers just aren't accepting portal fantasy. Which is weird, because a lot of people still seem to like them. XD But hey. :P

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    3. Good idea. *nods*

      Should've guessed. Thanks! That's a while ago, then . . . I'm not sure if I even knew you at that point, honestly.

      Huh. That's weird. I shall have to see if I can find those articles. But- oh well. If no one will consent to publish my portal fantasy, I'll make like Kendra and do it myself.

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  4. I seriously cannot get over these new covers! They're so pretty-full! <3

    ~Liv
    livkfisher.blogspot.com

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    1. I know, right? Kendra and Alea did a great job.

      Thanks for commenting!

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